Sunday, May 17, 2009

Excerpt: Mercury


Since we are going to the Fort Worth Zoo today, I felt a little compelled to give you an idea of my ideal type of day to go. Our zoo really is breathtaking, and while my YA/SF novel is a little more fiction than my experience would be, I still think you can get the idea.

Mercury is the first novel I wrote, wrote it in 3 weeks. Julia is the main character, and Michael is the one taking her to the zoo. Enjoy.

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The Fort Worth Zoo, open three hundred and sixty-five days a year, displays more than five thousand animals on sixty-four acres of well maintained vegetation. Every exhibit well managed, every creature handled with the highest care, every worker and volunteer truly happy about what they do and what their job stands for. Ranked as one of the best zoos in the nation on many reliable lists, the Fort Worth Zoo is spectacular, and I wished I could see it more often. I am very picky about the days I choose to go. Being in Texas, a perfect zoo day for me is either the spring or fall, on a day like today; clear and seventy degrees. Absolutely the most perfect day to go.

And to make it more enjoyable, I am with Michael and I’m supposed to be in school. Awesome.

We step through the rugged entrance gates after Michael paid our way in, and I was hit with the usual zoo smells. A sweet yet pungent mixture of flora, dirt, and animal droppings. Trees canopying paved and dirt paths, exhibits clean and inviting, animals going about their business and in their own little worlds. I also loved the sounds; water trickling in ponds and waterfalls, strollers and wagons carrying young and picnic baskets, children misidentifying animals, birds chirping, animals crying, a train horn blaring. Just a sensation overload that’s gloriously magnificent.

I stopped, took a deep breath, and when a gentle breeze kissed my cheek I closed my eyes. I love the zoo.

I stood there a few seconds before I felt warm fingers intertwine with mine. “Are you ready?” Michael asked.

I took another deep breath, and let his hand surge heat through my entire body. I opened my eyes and smiled at him. “Yeah.”

We strolled, hand in hand, through the maze that was the zoo. Every now and then, when we stopped to appreciate an animal in a replica of its natural habitat, Michael would drape an arm around my shoulders. Throughout the place, I noticed I was really letting my guard down around him, I was reciprocating his affections. Michael noticed this and was taking advantage of it. Not in a deceptive sort of way, just as an invitation to close the gap that was between us. It felt good. It felt really good to be this close to him. All of my insides were beaming and I couldn’t help but smile being around him.

After we were about halfway through, Michael excused himself to make a call. I waited patiently, and he strolled back up to me. “Did you know there was a new exhibit? It is temporary, but breathtaking.” He smiled. “I think you will really like it.”

My eyes got bright. “Really? I hadn’t heard of anything new.”

We walked a few minutes, and he guided me to within twenty yards of a set of pine doors that entered into what looked like an aviary. Netting draped high into the trees, I could tell there were exotic flowers behind the two sets of screen doors.

Michael stopped me. “Stay right here, don’t move.” He gave me his signature grin.

He went and talked to a man in a forest green polo shirt and khaki shorts, which was usual Fort Worth Zoo uniform. Michael spoke a few words to the man, the man nodded, and they shook hands.

Michael walked back toward me, and offered an arm for me to take, just like a gentleman would. “Shall we?”

I looped my arm in his. “We shall.”

As we walked closer to the double doors, the man Michael was talking to was putting a large sign just outside the door that read ‘This Exhibit is Temporarily Closed’. When we approached, the man opened the door for us, and after we walked through the first set, the man stood guard at the entrance.

“I arranged to have the entire exhibit to ourselves for a while. I hope you don’t mind.” He said, winking at me.

Michael slowly opened a second door to go through, and at first glance I saw vibrant colors of many different varieties of flowers and rich bushes. I could smell the sweet nectar secreting from everything surrounding the path, the lush greens of the bushes and small trees that were blotched in random places.

I padded my right foot on the gravel path, and although it was a slight movement and quiet sound to my ears, it rustled everything on the path immediately in front of me.

I froze and gasped.

My movement fluttered dozens of butterflies from their original position. I watched for a almost an entire minute as the butterflies of many different colors, shapes and sizes, settled into a new pose, gently flapping their delicate wings on their new vegetation.

Michael slowly appeared at my side, careful not to disturb them too much, and gently laid a hand on the small of my back. “Do you like it?” he whispered.

My hands reached my face, in awe of what I was witnessing. “Oh Michael…it’s beautiful,” I said, trying to whisper too.

He guided me, with his hand still on the small of my back, deeper into the exhibit. I crouched in front of a lovely bunch of yellow aster, and found my favorite species of butterfly; the Blue Morpho.

This Blue Morpho in particular was a magnificent shade of sapphire blue, my favorite color, and I was close enough to see the veins branching out into perfectly symmetrical wings, the deep black velvet lining, and the flecks of white dotting the tips. I put my fingers to within inches, wanting to touch it, but held back not wanting to disrupt its feeding.

I stood up slowly and turned to Michael. “This is absolutely amazing.” I was shaking my head and I smiled at him. “You are something else, you know that?”

He smiled at me, and it lit up his eyes. “I am quite aware of that actually.”

Before I knew it, he had his toned arms around my waist, held me close, and his molten chocolate eyes looked deep into mine. My heartbeat started picking up pace, and my breathing became erratic. I was trying very hard to control it, but I don’t think I was succeeding. He stared at me for what I thought was an eternity, and next thing I knew, his lips were on mine.

At first, I was stiff, like I had totally forgotten how to do this. But the heat radiating from his mouth surged warmth into my entire body, and I melted in his arms. My hands found the back of his neck, my fingers finally got to touch his thick soft locks. His hands clutched at my shirt, pressing me against his body. Before I knew it, we both stopped, breathing rapidly, still locked in each others arms.

He closed his eyes, and leaned his forehead against mine, “Julia…”

I closed my eyes.

He brought his hands to my cheeks and held them there, staring into my eyes. “Julia?”

“Yes?”

“Do you trust me?”

I furrowed my brows at him. “Yes.” And I could feel I really meant that.

He paused for a few beats, and his face became serious before he started again. “I need to tell you something.”

Panic suddenly crept in. Does he already have a girlfriend? Is he moving? Does he have an incurable disease? You know what, now that I think about it, lately when people told they needed to tell me something, it got way too weird for comfort levels. “Okay…”

“Actually it’s probably easier if I show you.”

He completely let go of me, his movements fluttering dozens more butterflies from their perches. He stood about a foot away from me, and held his hands up, elbows down and palms toward me.

He waited, and it took me a few seconds to realize what he wanted me to do. I looked at my hands, and held them up to his, and paused an inch away. Michael didn’t flinch, no facial expression, just waited. I gently leaned my hands against his, and the surge of warmth ran through my body again. Every time he touched me this happens, and it always calmed me, and I don’t think I could ever get tired of it. When we made skin contact, it was like we were the only two people on the planet. Right at this very moment, it was like nothing else existed, no other breaths of life, no other sounds of nature, nothing else mattered but me and him.

Wait a minute…

I jerked my hand away and looked around, cautious. Nope, still in the same place I was sixty seconds ago.

My eyes caught his again, and he hadn’t budged, still no emotion on his face, still palms held out to me. I narrowed my eyes at him, and even slower this time, I pressed my palms against his. More aware this time, more conscience of what was around me.

He intertwined his fingers with mine, to keep them there.

I stared in his eyes, afraid to look away. There were no other breaths of life; there were no other sounds of nature. No bubbling brooks, no children whining, no wagon wheels hitting pot holes in the pavement, no rustling of leaves, no wildlife chatter behind gated enclosures, no gentle breeze on my cheek.

My breathing got heavy, and the hundreds of butterflies that were in my stomach were churning uncontrollably. I finally got the nerve to break our eye contact, and once again I froze. Once again, I gasped.

Not more than two feet away from my face, was the Blue Morpho butterfly that I was admiring minutes ago.

That Blue Morpho butterfly was suspended in mid flight.

Thursday, May 14, 2009

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Maxywell Cynn's ArchAngelxx has been posted as my first official review! If you haven't read it, check it out!

Monday, May 4, 2009

Review: ArchAngelxx by Maxwell Cynn





ArchAngelxx.net
If they control your computer, they control your mind.

"You have a virus on your computer. Its tracking everything you do. If you have a microphone it can hear you. If you have a web cam, they are even watching you. It can not be detected by any anti-virus scan, or blocked by any firewall, they make sure of that. It's not just watching you, it's communicating to you subliminally. Messages from them, flashing on your screen, just beyond your conscious perception. But your sub-conscious sees them: you are being brainwashed." CG

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Maxwell Cynn had me at, "Trust no one."

Okay, let's forget for a moment that he quoted more than once my all time favorite television show, just so I can tone down my excitement.

Cynn shows us the world of a man on the run. Where paranoia is just another word for longevity, and he dances a fine line with what is meant to be real and what is pure fabrication of the human psyche. Or is none of it real, and just an elaborate brainwashing movement meant to lock contraints on humans as a race? When humans, as a whole, are stripped of our abilities to act 'human', what is left? Mindless drones that succumb to higher powers beyond their control?

Oh, I don't think so.

CG is on a mission, to destroy the very thing that is destroying what makes us human. This refreshingly unpredictable piece had me turning pages faster and faster, having no idea what was going to happen next. Cynn makes you feel exactly what the character feels, which is a remarkable feat. It has everything; romance, mystery, suspence, murder. The characters were vibrant and well played. Maxwell's literary voice is like hard candy; Cynn-fully sweet, and rolls on the tongue quite nicely. Even with the jargon, Cynn was sure it made sense to the technically challanged readers (such as myself). Everything was beautifully written and I am proud to back this and give it my seal of approval.

Do you dare download ArchAngelxx to rise with the resistance? Are you human enough to rage against the machine?

The online version of "Archangel" is up and running. You can read the book, and join the ArchAngel network free. Just visit http://archangelxx.net/ and the complete unabridged text is available online. When you sign up (at a certain point in the story CG, the main character, will ask you to join ArchAngel) make sure you give your correct e-mail address because you can expect an email from CG.

Saturday, April 18, 2009

Excerpt: Sizzling Summers


The six-foot six-inch, two hundred and fifty pound mass that was Sam Derringer looked ridiculous behind the commercial grade desk, sitting in a chair that he could turn to kindling. His rust colored hair was slightly aglow from the intermittent rays of sunlight that shone through the cracked blinds of his office. He closed his emerald green eyes and started rubbing them with his meaty fingers. “Look Evie, I don’t have the strength to fight with you today.”

All five-foot five-inches of Evelyn’s frame stood in front of his desk and pointed a finger at him. “You’re punishing me for not going to dinner with you Friday night.”

“Don’t start Evie. I invite you to dinner every Friday night.” His brows furrowed in sadness. “Grace misses you. She needs you.” His tone softened. “She needs her sister.”

She plopped down in the brown leather chair, her navy polyester pants sliding a bit, and looked at her black work boots. They seemed to really show against the awful teal carpeting.

Sam leaned his elbows on his desk, and raked a hand through his hair. He looked tired. “She was up all night throwing up. She’s miserable.”

Evelyn looked at him with slight sincerity. “That can happen in the ninth month of pregnancy.”

He shook his head and looked down. “This didn’t happen with the other three,” he said softly

That comment made Evelyn swallow hard and look at her hands. “Is she drinking enough water? Resting? Did she call the doctor?”

“Yeah, but she’s not good Evie. She wants to see you.”

She fiddled with her watch and cleared her throat. She looked back up at him. “Can we get back to work now? I am not training the new guy. Why can’t Jerry do it? He always trains the new people.”

“Jerry is already training a new guy. We are drowning Evie, we’ve lost too many people with all this mess. Corporate is breathing down our necks to clear up the ‘confusion’.” Sam looked at her, serious. “I need my best man on this one anyway, and that’s you. This is a … special circumstance.”

Evelyn lifted a brow. “Special circumstance?”

Now Sam was clearing his throat. “He is sort of a special case.” He paused. “All I can say is that he knows some higher ups, and he was given a job here. We need to show him our best. That’s you.”

She rolled her eyes. “Sam, you know damn well flattery doesn’t work for me, so don’t even try.”

He grinned slightly, trying to lighten the mood. “Yes it does. Besides, you have no choice.” There was no point in trying to be a demanding boss to Evelyn, so he threw up surrendering hands. “I promise I will make it up to you, don’t worry.”

Evelyn shook her head and snatched the day’s paperwork from him as she stood up. “You better, or else.”

Sam grimaced and raked another hand through his hair.

She turned to storm out of the office, and there was a guy leaning against the doorjamb with his arms crossed. At first glance, Evelyn thought beach bum; shaggy sandy blonde hair, nice golden tan, plaid surfer shorts, a white t-shirt stretched over well formed muscles, and sandals. She estimated him to be around her age, early thirties, and a good six inches taller than her. If he didn’t look so damn smug and lazy, she would have thought him to be kind of attractive.

“Who the hell are you?” Evelyn asked, not at all trying to hide her disdain.

Joshua just looked at her and grinned. “Well, aren’t you just a ray of sunshine in this drab office.” Noting the irony, he actually thought seriously of what he just said. She was pure beauty, her inky black hair was swept into a ponytail showing off her heart shaped face and crystal blue eyes. Hardly any makeup, he could tell, and her naturally flawless complexion probably did better without it. Her uniform, although intended to be unflattering to either gender, was tailored to show off every feminine curve of her sleek figure. The pale blue button up shirt only intensified her icy eyes, and just looking into them gave Joshua a surge of heat in the pit of his stomach. Looks like she’s feisty too, he thought, and I enjoy a challenge.

He offered a hand to her. “Joshua McKenna. I do believe we will be working together.” His grin widened.

She turned back to look at Sam, and he acknowledged with a nod. She let out a hot breath and looked back at Joshua.

Sam stood up to try to ease the tension Evelyn was protruding, which was comical considering he intimidates most people just by volume. “Joshua, this is Evelyn Summers.” He turned to look down at Evelyn. “You two need to get along, you will be working together for two weeks.”

“Two weeks?! Do you think I am that incapable?” She shot a look at Joshua. “Or is he that incompetent?”

Joshua finally retracted his hands, and folded his arms again. The smile was still plastered to his face. He thought it best to not say anything.

“Evelyn!” Sam said, with definite authority now in his deep voice. “Just do your job and train him. You don’t have to like it, but don’t be rude about it. Do I make myself clear?”

She inched out her chin and wisped her bangs to the side. “Crystal.”

Sam nodded and went back behind his desk. “Good, now get out of here, both of ya.”

Joshua was taking up most of the three foot doorway, but Evelyn found a way to slink past him. Fuming, she stormed out of the offices at a brisk pace, the bland cream color of the walls a blur. Finally figuring he should follow her, Joshua made a fast break to close in and get in stride next to her. They made it through the double glass doors and toward the parking lot outside.

Being that it was the end of June in Fort Worth, Texas, it was already ninety-five degrees at nine o’clock in the morning. The air was thick and stagnant with no breeze, and after only ten seconds out in it they had already started to perspire. This is why I don’t wear makeup, Evelyn thought, and why in God’s name do we have to wear polyester? My ass is already sweating.

They were halfway to the lot when Joshua finally had to ask, “Do you have a problem with me?”

Evelyn stopped abruptly to face him. The fire in her eyes made him take a step back and bump into the concrete wall. She had a finger pointed into his hard chest. “Listen, I work alone, that is why I took this job a year ago. I also get a lot of crap from guys because I’m a girl. I don’t tolerate any of it, which means I won’t take it from you either. I don’t care who it is you know, or did, to get this job. I wouldn’t even give a shit if your dad was my boss, the CEO of this company, or better yet, the ruler of the whole goddamn universe. I. Don’t. Care. Just learn your job. The faster you learn, the sooner you can leave me alone. Do you think you can handle that?”

Joshua glared at her in thought. His pulse quickened, but not with fear, because that would be what she wanted. He had the unsettling feeling it was because he liked her talking to him this way. He brushed away the thought, grabbed her finger that was digging into his chest and brought it down to her side. He spoke very coolly. “Do you kiss your mother with that mouth? I’m sorry, but you are going to have to watch your language around me. It’s very unbecoming anyway, especially for an exquisite ray of sunshine such as yourself.” He gave a sincere smile that was just sweet enough for her to know it was slightly dripping with sarcasm.

Making a disgusted sound with the back of her throat she started walking again. “I am not taking you out dressed like that.”

They made it to her work truck and she stopped just short of the driver side door. It was a white late model Ford F-250, with a topper on the bed. Many distinguishable tools were organized around the truck, and a ladder rack equipped with a twenty-eight foot ladder was safely in place. The royal blue and silver Linex Cable Communications logo was on the driver’s side door.

Joshua looked down at his clothes, then back at Evelyn. “Well, as appealing as it may sound to you, I can’t go around naked. I am almost positive it is against the law.”

She gave an impatient sigh and wiped sweat off of her upper lip. For a second, she almost wanted to picture him naked. “Do you have other clothes or not?”

“Sam said I was only observing today, so I thought I would stay cool and casual. What? Do you not approve?”

“You will never look cool or casual in one hundred degree weather. And I can’t take you out meeting customers looking like that. So, if you have nothing else, I guess we will have to start over tomorrow.”

Evelyn opened the driver side door to angle into the truck. Joshua gripped the top of the frame with a hand to stop her. She looked into his pale green eyes and registered a flicker of authority and irritation in them. “It just so happens that I have some work clothes in the car. If you will give me a minute I will change.” He stared at her a beat for understanding, and ambled away.

She watched him walk toward his car, and wondered why he was getting under her skin. Sure, she has plenty of reasons to want to work alone. She works better alone, she thought. More precise, less distractions. Joshua McKenna will be a distraction. Evelyn nodded her head and pouted her lips, watching his shorts hanging dangerously low on his hips and perfect ass as he walked away. Yep, definitely a distraction. She sighed, shook her head and got in the driver seat to get the air condition running.

Friday, April 17, 2009

April Showers


So, I knew April was going to be a busy month for me. I guess it didn't sink in as to how busy it was going to be.


I am on round two for Sizzlin' edits, and getting ready to send out the 3rd copy for edits. This novel is turning into something that might actually be marketable! I love what it's turning into, and what my editors have done with it. I completely and totally *heart* my editors!


Script Frenzy is, well, not going so well. I am still working on it though, adapting Mercury into a screenplay was a brilliant idea, so even if I don't finish the 100 pages in April I am definitely going to finish it at some point.

As always, thank you to everyone for all of your support, love, and inspiration.

Sunday, March 29, 2009

*squee*


There is no one word to describe how this week went. I busted ass to get the first draft of Sizzling Summers out before Script Frenzy, and I did it with 2 days to spare! So now, it's up to my super editors to polish it and make it sparkle.
Thud, the short story I wrote that Sizzling Summers is based off of, made it through round one of the WOW! Women On Writing Winter '09 Flash Fiction contest. Strange coincidence that I finish the rough draft of the novel on the same day I receive the confirmation email from WOW!
So, I am off to do research for my screenplay. I have 2 days to polish my mad screenplay writing skills and researching.
Thank you to all of my family and friends, who inspire me always, and give me a swift kick in the ass when I need it.

Friday, March 20, 2009

Script Frenzy '09


Mercury was my NaNoWriMo '08 winner, and my first novel, and I am very proud of it. The forums kept asking who was doing Script Frenzy '09, and I have to admit, I told myself it wasn't going to happen. Writing is a fairly new experience for me, Mercury being my first big project, so Script Frenzy sounded little intimidating.

Well, behold the Script Frenzy website: http://www.scriptfrenzy.org/

So, after much debate and research, I thought 'okay, its doable'. Why would I try to complete a script in April when I have other projects that need to be done? For the thrill of the competition. For the deadlines, for the late night/early morning caffeine surges, and relating to six thousand other people doing the exact same thing. NaNoWriMo was one of the hardest, yet most exciting things I have ever done, so here's hoping script frenzy gives me the challenges that I crave.

I have been debating doing this for a week, with no fresh ideas in my mind. After a really bizarre dream last night, I now have not only an idea, but half a script ready to be pumped out!

Sizzling Summers is almost complete, and I am going to rush to finish it before April.